John,
That spells things out a bit more. I think some people really like the "stool" visualization, but others just get confused at the introduction of a new and abstract concept. If it can be explained reasonably simply without "the stool", that might be better.
I'd suggest a slight re-organization though, writing-wise: Putting the last sentence, which is talking about the 7cM, immediately after where the 7cM requirement is brought up. Then maybe make the next part a new paragraph.
It also occurred to me in other discussions on this thread that there isn't any reason to exclude 3C or closer, and in fact most 3C matches on AncestryDNA don't meet "Rule 5" for one-to-one confirmation. In those cases, triangulation would be the way to go.
Fundamentally, there's nothing at all about a closer-relation match that means you can't do triangulation, it's just that if you can do a one-to-one instead, that that's inherently the better thing to do.
So I'd suggest an approach that's a bit different:
* First, define what constitutes a triangulation - three DNA tests among people with a common ancestor (or a male-female pair of common ancestors), where they all match each other on the same DNA segment. As it is, they just kind of jump into things without even saying exactly what's being talked about. And they start by literally talking about something ELSE.
* Second, (and I mean in a second paragraph) identify exactly what situations might offer the opportunity to do a one-to-one confirmation instead. Recommend that the reader look into that option, and to use it instead if the requirements for doing so can be met. This is really the only place we need to talk about 3Cs (or equivalents), because triangulation CAN be used for ANY relation - it's just that it's easier to do the one-on-one way when you can.
* Third (and 3rd paragraph), the stuff about needing 7 cM.
* Fourth (last paragraph), explain how the MRCA for each possible pair of matches among the three can only be one (or whatever number is decided) generation below the MRCA for all three.
The single paragraph you have isn't super long, but shorter pieces to "digest", one at a time, should make it a little easier for the reader, especially since I'm talking about adding a little introductory material at the beginning.