Improve a Biography

Question

Bio Improver's

I'm adding sources to the Orphan profiles and came across J. Searle Dawley.  Take a look and Please add your touch to his profile.

Thank you in advance.

Answer 1

Great work Searle! I made a few adjustments and broke up the paragraphs a little, but for the most part the profile already looked terrific. Now we need to search for some census and other records to see if we can flesh out his early life a little bit.

Answer 2

I added a census, marriage and death record to his profile.