Need help editing this as it is a terrible mess - not sure where or what to cut

Question

Would one of the experts at fixing up profiles, please help me out with this one.  It is a terrible mess & am not sure what & where to make cuts.

Answer 1

Nicol Smith

Scotland, Marriages, 1561-1910

marriage: 4 October 1822 Dunrossness, Shetland, Scotland

spouse: Marion Halcrow

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: Forbes Halcrow Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: Ursila Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: John Halcrow Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: Malcolm Johnson Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: Peter Halcrow Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

spouse: Marrion Halcrow

child: James Jameson Smith

 

Nicol Smith

Father

Scotland, Births and Baptisms, 1564-1950

child: Margarit

Comments

Thank you but have that info.  WHAT I WANT IS someone to Edit Nicol Smith's profile - his profile is Smith-39948.

 

You need to LOOK at it to see how badly done it is.

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Alright - I'm giving it a shot. This is what happens after a merge - the biography sections all get appended into each other. Looks like there were 3 merges that took place and no one has attempted to reconcile the data. I've put the sections into a more understandable order, so it should look better now.

I'll give it one more shot to see if I can merge the biography together and hopefully it will start to look a bit more orderly...

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THANK YOU,  thank you.  It was quite a mess so really appreciate your doing this

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Alright - that's closer. I think it still needs more cleanup in the bio, but at least I believe you may be able to take over from here and rewrite a consistent bio for him.

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Thank you so much.