Mags,
I have some comments on your page. First of all it's covering most that is important for DNA (and adoptees). I thought that a couple of pictures would help, I know there are some posted eg in Dr. Tim Janzen's presentation on what DNA is (to find at ISOGG wiki). Then there is the excellent one that Don Worth posted in DNA Newbie list on Facebook, it shows how far atDNA, Y-DNA and mtDNA test usually go.
As they say a picture says more than a thousand words. I could post those that I like here but I'm not sure if they are all free of rights (not even sure where those that posted it are the original authors). Please email me otherwise and I'll send them over to you.
I think this paragraph needs more clarification:
"Tier 1 Utilities - For a one-time donation of any amount, or the 'Join GEDmatch' button to establish a recurring $10 per month amount. Will give you the following Utilities:"
Question: Isn't it that you have to pay $10 to get one month of Tier 1 access? I haven't used it until now (not enough time to do genealogy as usual) so some others who have might comment.
In general it's a bit too thin to give GEDmatch enough credit. There is a lot of things you can do with the free version which isn't mentioned here. Triangulation can be done manually but I do understand that the tools on GEDmatch are overwhelming even to more experienced users sometimes. Admixture isn't mentioned, surely one thing that adoptees are interested in (I know it's an estimation but adoptees are looking for every straw to define themselves and their roots).
Not so sure about DNA.Land. It's still very small and I can't imagine that people only upload to the much smaller version of DNA.Land when GEDmatch has 200k+ kits to offer to match against. So that only doubles and might not give new results. Maybe you can reflect that as nothing is worse than expectations that aren't met.
Triangulation:
It's unfortunately a bit misleading, if not wrong. In your triangle example you're missing C, only when A,B and C have overlapping, matching segments at the same chromosome it's a triangulation. So please add that A needs to match C and B needs to match C as well (with the above condition which you explain in the text below the triangle).
The part about the top of the triangle is the MRCA is something I don't understand. It's the most difficult task to find a MRCA, not even speaking of a CA (common ancestor). The MRCA is correct in such that there is one for A and B. But there are other MRCA's (they could be all the same which would make the MRCA the CA but I never had that) as well, the one that A and C are both related to, same for B and C. Those are missing.
The CA is the couple (very important, many people get that wrong and think that MRCA and CA is a single person, it's always a couple) where A, B and C are related from. Usually it's different branches through two siblings (their children) and then later it spreads further through two more siblings. Again, a picture would say more than a thousand words illustrating MRCA, CA and such.
As for your "in simpler terms" list, I have written about how misleading ICW is. I wouldn't use it as FTDNA isn't giving the required data away and people would had to ask their matches anyway. On Ancestry is even worse, even if the person would answer no one knows where they match.
So triangulation down to two places only (that info is missing here as well), 23andme (amongst their own testers only!) and GEDmatch. When you're doing it manual at GEDmatch you don't need ICW, actually you can't even find the term "ICW" being used on GEDmatch at all (it's a FTDNA term, also not used at 23andme - not sure about AncestryDNA though). Again, it's all about managing expectations. Newbies might spend days trying to figure out how trees match at FTDNA as they think an ICW is their relative where in reality sometimes it's not. That's discouraging to say the least. For adoptees it's best to concentrate first on GEDmatch and spend time there, only when they are done with all their 1500 matches shown they should move to FTDNA (if they tested there). Only exception is good matches over 20cM, those are more promising and to a much higher chance also IBD.
That's all for now, hope this is helpful Mags! Keep up the good work