Nicely done Michelle. Well on the way. If I were writing this profile, I would avoid the "we find" and use something like: Ludger Poulin was listed in the 1861 Canadian Census .....
There's a tense thing that goes on when talking about census data. I catch myself doing it all the time. Things like: "They are living next door to Pierre ..." and "Ludger and Marie have moved." We get caught into the timeframe of the census, but we need to remember that the census took place in the past so: They lived next door to Pierre Ludger... and Marie had moved.... (I was an English major, once upon a time and feel free to ignore this paragraph if it seems like too much... There aren't any grammar police on wikitree)
I agree about the bolded names being kind of busy.
The story has a nice flow to it. Thank you for taking the time to write a nice bio.
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