Certainly - I totally agree with you. That's why I started this G2G discussion and posted a link to the G2G discussion on the profile inviting them to add their input here. I'm hoping they will join in. A collaborative edit of something this big should be discussed G2G and not one on one (ad hoc) with the eight different profile administrators. Plus other interested members who are not administrators my have input that is valuable which they can also share on G2G.
The only change I made was to add a disputed parents section at the very end (way, way, way down there).