You did a fine job. Thank you for the work you did on the Garber book, what a task that must have been!
I made a couple of small edits, formatted a source, added a source (Patricia Hatcher wrote a couple of great articles on the family in 2012 and 2013 - well worth reading, if you can get copies). The other (again small thing) is that I put your note in 3rd person. By tradition, we only use first person in hidden notes or in messages on the bulletin board.
All the little stuff will come in time (and with reading). You fit right in - you care about accuracy and sources, and you communicate. Perfect. Thanks!