Hi Pamela, Looks like you did a great job!!
Just one thing though, you want to put an * in front of each of your sources (like the first one) so that they are all indented on the finished product.
*1910; Census Place: Edwardsville, Madison, Illinois; Roll: T624_310; Page: 3A; Enumeration District: 0036; FHL microfilm: 1374323. Found on ancestry.com
*1920 - Census Place: Edwardsville, Madison, Illinois; Roll: T625_389; Page: 19A; Enumeration District: 47. Found on ancestry.com.
*World War 2 Draft etc.