Here's the current iteration with your recommendations. I removed the state reference after the name since it is part of the land office designation.
Bureau of Land Management, "Land Patent Search," database, General Land Office Records," (www.glorecords.blm.gov/search/default.aspx : accessed 22 August 2018), entry for George B Woodham accession #AL4960__.279, Land Office: Montgomery, Alabama, Issue Date: 11/28/1900.
Thanks also to the reference about the EE guide details - this will really help me with some of my source formatting questions!