Can someone take a look at Jesse Chisholm's bio?

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I recently adopted a profile for Jesse Chisholm (of Chisholm Trail fame) and did some cleanup on his bio following a merge.  I've never dealt with a bio for a person who had a Wikipedia page so I'm not sure how to reference it.
WikiTree profile: Jesse Chisholm
in Policy and Style by Kathie Forbes G2G6 Pilot (865k points)
Howdy, sorry but as an ald Texan, I just have to say something about that line that the Chishom Trail was named after Jesse Chishom.

Jesse Chisholm marked out a trail section in Oklahoma.  The southern end of what was to become the trail began in southern Texas in the area around DeWitt County.  The first cattle drive after the Civil War was in 1866 and was bossed by THORNTON CHISHOLM, who died on another drive up the trail a couple of years later..  So guess who the trail is known to be named after down here!  Dagnab it!! (my Gabby Hayes impersonation, for those who know who Gabby was).

Seriously though, this is not an attempt to get everyone to change the story, Jesse Chisholm is widely accepted today.  Just wanted to point out that there is another version of that story, no where near as well known.  If anyone is interested in finding out a little about Thornton Chisholm, just google his name.  Everyone in that part of Texas always knew TC as the namesake for the trail.  Wasn't until the 1950s that I even heard about JC.  But as all the old timers died off, modern historical revisions have taken over, not many of us remember the old stories.

My interest in this story?  My great grandpa George Alexsander was on that first cattle drive in 1866, his daughter Emma was my grandma and was the defacto family historian.  She told me all the stories when I was a young boy many decades ago.

And by the way, a very nicely done profile too, a credit to Wikitree!

edit:  Occurs to me that Thornton might not have a profile here yet  Guess I'll have to look into that.
I am the Great-Great Granddaughter of Glenn Thornton Chisholm, I have some post on Ancestry.com. My dad was named after his Great-grand father's. Glenn Thornton - Anne Thornton Chisholm Filleman - Coralea Filleman Edwards - William Glenn Edwards - Mary Lea Edwards Nuttall
Hi Mary, welcome to Wikitree.  Glad to see a descendant of Thornton Chisholm join us.  You've probably seen that there is a profile already in place here, but its never really been expanded, so we would love to hear your family's remembrances of him if you wish to share.  There are still a number of us down here where the trail began that remember that it was Thornton Chisholm that took the first herd north.

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Kathie, it looks splendid to me - THANX for doing the research, and doing such a beautiful job on the profile!

About the Wikipedia reference, I think it looks great exactly the way it is, although the WikiTree standard style would be to put "See also:" on a line by itself and follow it with as many additional references as you have (or want to use).  Each one would start with an asterisk (*) on the edit page, which displays them as a bulleted list.
by Gaile Connolly G2G Astronaut (1.2m points)
selected by Deb Durham
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It looks wonderful. I've taken the liberty of adding the notables sticker, adding templates for Wikipedia, wikidata, and FindAGrave, and also added the WikiTree ID to the wikidata page. I also uploaded the portrait image from Wiki Commons. I also created a link to his profile at Encyclopedia of Oklahoma History and Culture so it doesn't overrun the page.

Great work, Kathie!

by Deb Durham G2G Astronaut (1.1m points)
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Thanks to all who have helped give Jesse the nice profile he deserves.
by Kathie Forbes G2G6 Pilot (865k points)
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This is a very good profile. You have provided information that helps in keeping the legacy of Jesse Chisholm alive.
by Dean Anderson G2G6 Pilot (782k points)

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