Looks like you added Biography to the profile from at least one other source, since it has 'click here' in a few places. You added the information before the Biography Header, so I moved the Biography Header to the top of that profile, added some colons to help with readability since you have quite a few areas that were running together. I revised your Find a Grave citation into a inline source citation, incl the template, so it has a direct link to the Find a Grave page.
I have sent you a private message also, with some additional information.
More spacing is needed on the profile. There is a lot of information on the children that should probably be moved to their profiles, along with sources, leaving minimal information on the parent's profiles.