Your bio is very well written. It is better than any of mine for sure. The reader gets a sense of the actual woman, not just some dry facts. Your links to living people seem fine to me. It doesn't give away any information that could easily be used for identity theft or anything.
Sorry. I am quite the nit-picker. I think you could add links, if you like, to Enrico Fermi if he is on Wikitree, FERMILAB if something about it is online, and the Manhattan Project. This is very easy to do. I just use two windows or tabs, one being the profile in the editing format, then the other is something about the Manhattan Project. Just copy the url to your clipboard, place an open bracket [ in front of the "The Manhattan Project" in your bio, space, paste the url next to the bracket [ (you'll use your arrow key to back up a space so you are next to the bracket) then put a close bracket ] after Project. It will look like this:
[http://www.manhattanprojecthistory.com The Manhattan Project]
Then it will just look like this:
The Manhattan Project.
If you want, I can do one for your so you get the idea. Better yet, I'll point you to page already done.
Did I say I was a nit-picker? I don't really think your sources are sufficient. Policy here is to use inline citation, but at the least, you should include a link and where you found it. If you use FamilySearch for the census, it is very easy because they give you the source citation, just copy/paste.