Hi Keven,
Thank you for sharing your profile for Margaret, it's a great profile! It's well researched and full of great facts that make an interesting read. I did come across a few things you might want to take a look at.
- I noticed in your "see also" section, a lot of sources were repeated. I see that they are from Ancestry and you used the Familysearch citations in your inline citations. You can combine these to create on citation that cites the record from both repositorys. No need to be repetitive.
- Frank's death is mentioned in the middle of the residence section. It seems a little out of place with the other information there. It might be better mentioned somewhere else in the bio.
- Margaret's adopted child needs to be attached. It is possible to add a child and choose a non biological connection. So this adopted child can now be attached to 2 sets of parents, biological and adoptive.
- Status indicators for children and siblings have not been set. If there are more siblings, they need to be added or a note should be added to explain why you cannot select status set for them.
I really enjoyed reviewing this profile, you really put a lot of work into it, Good luck!
