REVIEW COPIED from Challenge Site to G2G SITE: Sorry for the delay Kathy.
This is a lovely profile, concerning your older brother Charles. The first thing to consider is whether to change your own status from Private to Private with Public Biography, or to Private with Public Biography and Family Tree. This will allow your brother's profile to at least reveal your existence, which makes sense as you are named as profile manager. You will need to use in-line citations to qualify for Gold Status, which will make the profile more readable and not cluttered with longer citations. The reader can click on the footnote to read the complete citation. Ask for help on G2G if you're not familiar with inline references. You may wish to document his doctorate degree with the date awarded and by whom, if you wish to use the formal honorific "Dr." Several of your sources to life events need tightening, such as the 1950 Census which is good for proof of relationship to parents but not proof of DOB. The FindAGrave memorial is acceptable only where the actual date of birth or death is inscribed on the stone (not just the year) . His birth record from Lockport, Niagara, New York should be available and if not, you'll want to explain why in a Research Note. If you have the death certificate, you could scan that into your computer and then upload to WikiTree as a photo but using the "text" function. After you submit your updates myself or another reviewer will take another look at it.
